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How to avoid turning dialogue into Q&A session?

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"The flux capacitor--it's what makes time travel possible." When to keep world-building explanations short

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What are good places to post your work where it will be read by others?

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Using fake swear words without them seeming out of place to the reader

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7 answers
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What is a subtle way of mentioning a man became physically aroused?

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12 answers
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What does Show don't Tell actually mean

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5 answers
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How to describe the point-of-view character without using mirrors

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9 answers
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At what point does a POV character noting their surroundings go from showing/telling to an infodump?

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7 answers
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Breaking up a talky piece of writing

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Is it posssible to find a literary agent if I'm Egyptian but write in English?

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8 answers
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How to describe an angry voice in dialogue?

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Should dull dialogue be removed completely?

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Where in the writing process do you work in subtext?

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How can I describe nervousness?

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What is subtext?

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Is there a better way to introduce acronyms through a dialogue?

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How to make an email less "me" centric?

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Does a page-turner have to be continually high-octane?

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