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I think silky hair is just too simple as that is one of the most common ways that great hair is described. You could choose a more specific type of brown, like chestnut, chocolate or cinnamon brown. Cinnamon has the benefit that many readers might recall the nice scent. Or you could emphasise the intensity of the colour: vibrant auburn hair. If the poem is ...


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