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How do I get my writing to be more thrilling?
It's a bit difficult to tell what you actual problem is without reading one of your stories. Maybe you can ask your beta readers what they would have changed and in what way?
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When is a good time to have a betrayal?
Personally what I would do is build up the relationship with the character that they're going to betray. It will add a whole new layer of betrayal if the readers actually have a connection with the ...
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