'There is no line of my verse or prose which has not been mouthed till
the tongue has made all smooth, and memory, after many recitals, has
mechanically skipped the grosser superfluities'
Rudyard Kipling, Something of Myself, New York: Doubleday, Doran & Company, Inc., 1937, p 223.
If you feel the rhythm of a piece of writing doesn't work, you will ...
Whatever works. Some writers use techniques that make other writers boggle in astonishment that it works.
Experimenting with different ways helps develop ways that work for you. Particularly generating more possibilities if you have difficulties with that.