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How to write female characters with agency?

On "Jo Writes Stuff", Jo has produced an epic analysis of whether or not a character is a "strong female character"; and a test to go with it. Here is her instructions on How To Use The Test. She ...
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How to write female characters with agency?

Woman here. :) I think what your female character would struggle with most is that suddenly she does need her man beside her - for safety, for being treated a certain way by other people, etc. It ...
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How to not confuse readers with simultaneous events?

You could try using a common element outside of any of the scenes themselves to establish a common reference point in time. For example describe Alice and Bob having a heated marriage argument but ...
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Why not God as our subject?

As a counter-point to mbakeranalecta's answer: God can have a story arc albeit one with an obvious victor. For example: the Christian God Yahweh takes human form (with the name Jesus) in the books ...
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How do I keep the gender of my main character purposely ambiguous?

Just don't mention it! Consider giving your character a short name, so that it's less jarring when you inevitably use their name more often than usual, and find ways to phrase your sentences without ...
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Is omniscient observer POV really dead?

The first rule of writing is that there are no rules. You can write any story you want using any combination of POV. The recently late Terry Pratchett wrote many parts of his novels using omniscient ...
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How can I indicate time passing?

What does the time spend hiding do to your character? Pick things that start off easy to manage, but becomes hard to maintain (especially under stress or pressure), and talk about those. For example,...
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How do I keep the gender of my main character purposely ambiguous?

Once again, @MarkBaker is spot-on. When the author keeps information from the reader that the other characters all know, it feels manipulative to the reader. If you must keep something from your ...
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How to write a convincing character with a opinion that differs from the author's?

If the readers think the opinion of your protagonist is your own opinion, then I'd guess the problem is not that the protagonist has that opinion, but that the protagonist's opinion is not or not ...
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Is it okay for a chapter's POV to shift as it progresses?

There are two questions hiding in your question, 1. Can the POV character not be the character who's most active? Consider Sherlock Holmes as an example. Watson is the POV character, the story is ...
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How to not confuse readers with simultaneous events?

If your goal is hectic momentum, then two-sentence paragraphs with a visual indicator of "scene change" might work. Colonel Mustard frantically wiped up the table. No one would believe he hadn't ...
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When two first person POV characters meet

Personally, I have a strong dislike for multiple first person POV. With that said, I'd say your option of following through with one character's POV is best. It's not uncommon to have the same ...
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How do I keep the gender of my main character purposely ambiguous?

...I should write from [the] first-person perspective to make things easier... If for whatever reason you want to keep the gender of your main character a secret, the first-person perspective is the ...
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Can the prologue's POV be different from the POV of the main story?

This is not only done, but is a staple of George RR Martin's A Song of Ice and Fire - all books' prologues and epilogues have a one-time POV character that dies by the end of it. So yeah, it's ...
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How can I indicate time passing?

One possibility is to just say that time has passed. "The two men sat staring at each other, neither saying a word, for fifteen minutes." Another possibility is to fill the time with action. If the ...
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I'm writing a prologue from the POV of a non-English-speaking character. How should I write the dialogue?

The "subtitle problem" is an extremely common one in stories with multilingual characters, and there are a few different approaches. Here are three suggestions for how you can do it. In most ...
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How to Write Like a Little Kid

Character first They are still a character, and more importantly a protagonist who will compare directly in the same work to 2 other (adult) protagonists. They will each need to hold their own in the ...
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How to write from the male point of view?

Study Your Friends You likely have male friends. When speaking with them, really think about their responses. Listen to their phrasing and try to remember exactly how they put things, then go back ...
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How important is it for multiple POVs to run chronologically?

It is not necessary to run different character arcs chronologically synchronized. However, it is important not to create a false impression that these arcs are synchronized. For example in "A Song of ...
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How can I introduce a new POV late in my book?

One way to make the transition easier is to have more Points of View - chapters or interludes where the main character is not the POV. For example, if the main character tells someone that they are ...
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How to Write Like a Little Kid

I have a few ideas, gleaned from writing exercises that imposed this: Starting with, avoid misspellings and anything that would be cutsey-wotsey when it comes to dialogue and narrative voice. In ...
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Is omniscient observer POV really dead?

Which question do you want answered? Is omniscient observer POV really dead? Can a successful urban fantasy novel be narrated with a combination of both omniscient observer and individual characters ...
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The effect of different "narrative voices" in the same novel

The biggest risk is that you may lose the main characteristic of the narrator out of sight: to tell the reader what is important. There is nothing wrong with changing the point of view and paying ...
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How do I differentiate between the "voices" of my characters in a multi-character POV?

How do the people speaking around you, wherever you are, speak differently? How do your favorite authors give characters different voices? Here are a few ways your characters might differ: Different ...
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