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It is just fine for a song. Would seem odd in normal prose.


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In terms of meaning, emotional impact, etc. how is: In the dark alley of my youth, light, it shone from the cloud-laden sky. different from: In the dark alley of my youth, light shone from the cloud-laden sky. ? If the unusual wording isn't there to affect the audience in some specific way, it simply looks like awkward writing. The same words could be ...


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