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I need help writing a scene or experience about air being knocked out of you

Having had the wind knocked out of me I can tell you the following: It hurts. It takes a strong blow to the upper body to knock the wind out of you. Whatever part of the body that got hit is going ...
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I need help writing a scene or experience about air being knocked out of you

Similar questions have been asked often before on this site – from How do I realistically describe using a whip? to How do I describe the sound of an oar touching the water? –, and the answer is ...
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