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Difficulty describing a complex image in a single sentence
I am having difficulty explaining that the sun evaporated the fog that had brushed up against the blooming hills. When I add "with spectacular wildflower blooms", it sounds as if the sun ...
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Non-sense question about plot structures
Suppose then you have an story in your mind. Then, to write down this finite series of events, you have to translate your imagination into the paper. This process isn't trivial, of course and plot are ...
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Doubt about the difference between a "Beat" and a "Event"
My main source of research about storytelling/screenwriting/how-to-write-a-book manual is [1]. But, the definition of "beat" given by [1] maybe can causing me some confusion.
In [1] we have a ...
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What are good ways to improve as a writer other than writing courses?
As a novice writer to improve my writing I have taken one online course. I want to ask, what are good ways to improve as a writer other than writing courses?
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Is there something "wrong" with my writing? How do I improve it? [closed]
So I usually use stackexchange as a last resort, but I'm completely stumped. If this question is inappropriate here, I will gladly delete it.
None of my teachers say that anything is wrong with my ...
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Ordinary writing or Prose: how to make it immersive?
As a beginner, I have a frequent problem when writing: I know what I want to write, but I fail to put it in good sentences that reflect my thoughts.
Often, this appears in dialogues when I try to ...
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How to link two sentences properly? [closed]
I have two sentences:
In general, the better the equipment, the higher quality of
production you will end up with.
We choose our equipment very carefully.
To link them together, I have to use the ...
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How to combine 3 sentences into one? [closed]
I have a character limit and hence would like to reduce my sentences from three to one or at best two. I am not sure how I could simplify this.
Are you looking for an explainer video for your ...
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How to confidently attract the other party to your side?
I have the following sentence:
Once they realize they have no chance of defeating you, they'll end up joining you.
I feel this sentence may come across as a bit "cocky" because I would want the ...
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How to link two sentences? [closed]
I have the following sentences:
Anyone can use stock footage.
and
Only you know how to use it correctly.
I am wondering if it makes sense to combine them as such
Anyone can use stock ...
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How to simplify a sentence so that a younger audience can understand it?
I have the following sentence:
Pocket squares are a standout amongst the most vital apparatuses for a
man of style. It's important to have the correct pocket square for the
correct event.
I ...
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How to sound confident but not cocky?
I am working on this slogan, and it comes out like this.
On the road to success.
What I mean by that is that I have positioned myself to accomplish something, but while I am not there yet, I have ...
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Turning normal phrases into gerund phrases: What's the effect in the reader?
For example, what's the difference between:
She closed her eyes and thought about her life.
He was so confident and handsome women circled him like vultures.
And this:
Closing her eyes, she
thought ...
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How to write a short, and persuasive headline? [closed]
I have the following sentence that I am thinking of using as headline `
Shop online. Locally.
`
However, I am not sure if this headline connects well with it sub-headline.
Pick up the goods ...
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