Alex look around the room, it's almost empty except few small empty boxes and few clothes.
Alex look around the room. It's almost empty except few small empty boxes and few clothes.
Alex look around the room. The room is almost empty except few small empty boxes and few clothes.
Which one of these good for creative writing like story writing? I want the sentences to flow like fluid. If I choose first one(1), is it acceptable? In third sentence I'm re-referring the object of the first sentence again as subject in the second sentence. I do the same things in second but not using the direct word "the room" but I use "it".