This is a personal narrative where I want to narrate my creative side. I start off strong with figurative language, descriptions, and metaphors. But as I get into my anecdote and what I learned from it, I tend to start cutting out flowery language which leaves a very methodical/step-by-step description of an activity that I did. I find it hard to show rather than tell (but also show in an interesting way) when I'm trying to get a point across.
Any tips? I'd be happy to provide any content from my essay as an example.