I'm in close third PoV. My character has a specific way of thinking: two voices in her head discuss all the time.
In my paragraphs, I then have three "voices":
- The usual, close Narrator voice
- The first internal voice
- The second internal voice
As a short example:
Alssa had just left a sunny street to enter the first hotel she’d found, and yet the lobby’s lights still blinded her. She glanced around, accommodating to the brightness. Mh, Quite fancy. Nothing we haven’t seen before, though, right?
Here, I used italic and bold sentences to display the difference in voices, but I feel like the bold sentences draws too much attention. Here are some of the ideas I had:
- Formatting it like a dialogue, but I'm afraid it'll get confusing with the real dialogues. And I might want to use those voices in the text between actual dialogues
- Using different fonts, but I can't see to find a combination that looks great.
Any ideas? Thank you!