I started to post my unpublished work on an online forum. Where you post your work slowly in an unspecified time.
I posted my prologue and a chapter 1. It seems that some people liked it and actually can't wait for the rest. Which makes me guilty because the time gap between chapters is a bit long.
But, with daily life and all, and a beginner writer that started writing for fun, you could say I'm inexperienced.
My problem is that I'm a bit slow and when I do start to sit down to write, I have a hard time constructing, pacing, and connecting words.
I know basic grammar rules, I know where my story will go, I know the goal of each chapter, I know how to invoke emotion in readers, etc.
I just seem to have trouble with putting my thoughts on a screen.
Is there any advice for this?