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According to the Strunk & White's The Elements of Style (p. 46)

at the end of a list introduced by such as, for example, or any similar expression, etc. is incorrect.

However, I have seen "etc." in many places at the end of a list starting with e.g. Is it incorrect in today's formal English?

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    It probably depends on what style guide you adhere to. Strunk and White's is by far not the only one. If I remember, I'll try to check what CMOS says (if anything).
    – user54131
    May 6, 2022 at 20:19

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It's certainly redundant. Since by saying "for example" you are making it clear that you are giving only some of the cases, it's superfluous to add that there are more by ending "and so on" at the end.

Those who object are likely to be pedantic, but then, no one's going to object if you don't.

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  • The Chicago Manual of Style agrees with this. It calls it redundant (§5.250), but not incorrect. (It calls very few things outright incorrect.) It also prefers not to use "etc." at all in formal prose (except in notes, tables and parenthesis; §6.20)
    – user54131
    May 8, 2022 at 16:12
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In formal English, the answer is yes. In normal English as typically used by "normal folks", not so much. I doubt that anyone is confused by what is a redundant usage.

The answer that matters is how will your readers react. It would probably annoy me but I am overly sensitive about grammar and punctuation. Years of reading and writing detailed technical specifications will do that to you. My favorite variation of Murphey's Law is, "If there is a way to misinterpret this specification, someone, somewhere, at this very moment, is doing exactly that." But the more typical writing such as shopping lists do not warrant such crankiness.

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  • "In formal English, the answer is yes." What's your source for that? May 7, 2022 at 7:54
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    See the answer to this question by Mary. My personal source is Mrs. Will, my 11th grade English teacher (50 plus years ago, however). May 7, 2022 at 12:11
  • Is Mrs Will the defining authority for "formal" English? Come on, you can do better than that. May 7, 2022 at 12:17

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