I am a non-native English speaker. Grammarly is an online writing assistant.
This is a line in my draft
I liked the office, and I liked the environment-- the minimalist furniture, the Macs and Xerox machines, the coffee room, and the lounge.
I have written it like that, with the phrase, 'I liked' twice. There's nothing to convey, I just feel like my character will say it like that.
Grammarly has suggested writing it like this;
I liked the office, and the environment-- the minimalist furniture, the Macs and Xerox machines, the coffee room, and the lounge.
Sorry if it seems pedantic, but there are many similar suggestions. The setting of the scene is in London. What should I do?