I saw that ending somewhere once, and have been using it ever since. Just wanted to confirm if there's anything wrong with adding that in a request letter for a medical leave
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Given that soliciting is how prostitutes make living, I wouldn't use it.– ChenmunkaCommented Dec 16, 2021 at 21:33
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If you think the only problem with ending a letter "please say yes!" is that it's a little casual, then this more formal version might be ok. But I don't like it at all, whether casual or formal.– Kate GregoryCommented Dec 19, 2021 at 16:54
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As a business manager I have received such closings before, and they irritate me. A little.
They are redundant and manipulative. Of course you are seeking positive response! What else would you be seeking?
Are you trying to make me feel guilty if I respond negatively?
A good way to end a formal letter is *"Respectfully,"*or perhaps "Thank you in advance for any help you can offer," or "Thank you for your time,".
Make your requests in the body of the letter. The closing line is an ending, not an opportunity to treat me like an idiot.
Not a good idea.
You have hopefully provided factual evidence in support of your request. The answer rests with the recipient. Do not overstep.
Soliciting a positive response is:
- weak: you solicit because you don't have good factual evidence to support your request
- manipulative (mentioned in another answer)
- disrespectful: you disregard the role of the recipient in having the freedom and power to give you whatever answer they see fit
- rude: common courtesy would rather suggest ending with a formal greeting like 'kind regards', 'sincerely', et cetera.
