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I recall a comma limit rule with respect to many things (inanimate) in a list e.g. "I have completed an initial patrol of all the interior/exterior points, including: doors, openings, passages, stairways, courtyard, entry gates & surroundings; also, garbage/recycle room & elevaor area @ P1:

How can I make this most readable?

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I think you're intending to ask, "how can I make this most readable."

I'd suggest the following for something that is more than 4 items long for the sake of readability:

I have completed an initial patrol of all the interior/exterior points, including:

  • doors
  • openings
  • passages
  • stairways
  • courtyard
  • entry gates & surroundings [NB logical grouping]
  • garbage/recycle room
  • elevator area @ P1
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