I will start by saying this isn’t a romance, but has your classic love triangle within the plot
The problem is, within my writing, I got in too deep with my first two characters love story, and now he just seems too perfect
I’m at the point now where I’m introducing the second guy and, quite honestly, I can’t write him. I can’t see my audience picturing him and her together the same way as I’ve written the initial couple. It’s not natural, it doesn’t make sense, but the whole plot line is that he helps her escape, and she only goes with him because she falls for him. How can she fall for him when I can’t fall for him myself, as the writer?
How do I write him in a different way to the initial Male, but good enough that the audience root for him, and not the initial companion?