In the dark alley of my youth,
light, it shone from the cloud-ladden sky.
I've been listening to the chirping in the trees.
Lately, I felt a bit more free.
I am wondering if this is acceptable. I am not sure if this is just called an inversion or there's a more specific technique involved here, but I was wondering if this is an awkward phrasing. I am also wondering if it's ok to put 3 almost unrelated sentences in the same verse in a song.