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In my novel I have written this line;

At your deepest core the buddha nature is waiting quietly for you.

Now Buddha-nature is a complex concept to understand. If the reader is not savvy about religious concepts it might confuse the reader.

However, a prior explanation would make the novel like a textbook as I don't have any plot that might lead me to explain that concept to the MC or any other character.

How do you handle the introduction of a concept and its use?

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    How much does the reader need to know about the buddha nature at this point? Also, a bit of mystery doesn't usually hurt, quite the opposite. If/when more aspects of the buddha nature get relevant, you can add them at that spot. Note that I have no idea what someone's buddha nature is, other than that it is most likely related to the nature of Buddha himself, which I, almost completely lacking knowledge about actual Buddhism, would associate with being peaceful and deeply contended. – celtschk Aug 3 at 10:50
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    I agree with @celtschk here. I've never heard this term before and I'm not a Buddhist. But I have some basic knowledge and at least I assume I know enough to get the gist of your sentence. If the concept is a lot more complex than an average reader would realize, it's probably fine to give a better explanation deeper into the novel. After all, even authors with entirely made-up terms that are central to the plot give just enough to get a gist then explain it later. – Cyn says make Monica whole Aug 3 at 16:21
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How do you handle, the introduction of a concept and its use?

There are many ways to do this. Generally, you don't introduce it at all, you just have a character (or, say, a sign or something on a meditation center) state the concept.

Then you have somebody that is clueless about what it means ask about it, and somebody explain it, in the same simplistic terms (without a class) you would explain it to a novice. Think of it as the "one minute university" version, think of a professor (or meditation center manager) that is in something of a hurry and has one minute to say something. The average talking speed is 125 words per minute (faster in some people/regions/languages, slower in others) and the average reading speed is 200 words per minute.

Set that is your limit: A practiced person that knows what they are talking about has 125 words to explain "Buddha nature", then they gotta run. So they leave out nuances, and convey a general idea.

ONE ALTERNATIVE is to generate a conflict; take TWO people that know what they are talking about, friends or enemies, and have them argue about their interpretations of what Buddha Nature is. Arguments, by the nature of dialogue and the interest sustained by the thrust and parry, can be longer than a page, just make sure the arguments are "legitimate" and seem valid, nobody saying "You're wrong Jim, but do go on for five minutes."

With an argument you can introduce more underlying concepts and oddly enough when we hear arguments we will build an approximation of the "center" or average position, and develop our own notion of what "Buddha Nature" means.

SECOND ALTERNATIVE, the character wondering about Buddha Nature finds a pamphlet that explains it. Similar to the knowledgeable person, but not interactive, and the paragraph or two they read can be more formally crafted (it doesn't have to sound like something a live person would say off the top of their head). Still, keep it to 125 words.

THIRD ALTERNATIVE: You may not need to explain it all. If understanding Buddha Nature is not really relevant to the plot, and this understanding has no influence on any characters involved, then it is fine to mention it for realism but not necessary to explain what it is.

In this sense, it is background color. If I show a forest in fall, I can describe the colors of leaves without explaining why they get that way.

Experiencing or witnessing or reading things we don't understand is part of everyday life, and we just presume it means something. I don't know what the barristas are doing half the time, but I presume they aren't just dancing or making random motions behind the bar.

If a chef tastes some mixture they are making and nods, I don't know what they were testing for and found.

What matters is if the non-understood thing actually matters, either to the plot, or to character development. To be worth explaining, it must have some influence on their decisions or feelings, or lead to a discovery, or love, or a realization of betrayal, etc. It must be necessary and shape the story and/or character in some way, impossible without it. Even a subtle way, e.g. knowing what Buddha Nature is might help convince a Buddhist later to take a risk and provide aid.

If it is not worth explaining, it is still useful for the realism it contributes to, say, visiting a meditation center. As authors, our job is to assist the reader's imagination, and describing settings is a part of that, giving them a feel for where they are and what it feels like. Including elements that add to the atmosphere of the place, and how they may feel in the moment being there, but don't really matter beyond that.

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Here are some questions that I would consider:

  1. Will the reader be able to enjoy the story without understanding the concept?
  2. Will reading the story from beginning to end make the reader understand the concept?

If one of those is yes, you're good. If they're both no, the reader won't have a good time.

Sometimes it's good to not explain things, if you want it to seem exotic and mysterious.

It's definitely OK to mention the concept without explaining it in the beginning, but the reader may expect and want you to explain it later, especially if not understanding it just makes the story hard to follow.

Writers often include an outsider character in a story for this reason. There can be a character who is not familiar with the same things the reader is not familiar with, and that character learns them when the reader needs to know them. They could be the main character, a side character, or a throwaway character who is only there for one scene. A foreign tourist visiting your Buddhist temple, a student attending a class, a British child suddenly finding herself lost in Narnia, a lawyer inspecting Jurassic Park on behalf of the shareholders, etc.

You also don't have to explain something in detail, if the reader can easily guess it from other things in the story.

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Often when writers use terms for concepts like "Buddha nature", I'm not sure the writers understand the concept themselves.

A good practice, I find, is attempting to paraphrase the concept in common words and then to use that paraphrase in the novel.

For example, I understand "Buddha nature" to mean "the universal, immanent potency of all living beings to become Buddha", that is, to achieve enlightenment.

I would therefore rephrase your example as something like:

At your deepest core, your ability to achieve enlightenment is waiting quietly for you.


English is not my mother tongue, and you might find a better way to phrase that sentence.

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