I need a checker and some kind of beta-test editor and critic. Is there a resource out in the web, where I can find myself one?
This list comprises well-known online critique and discussion groups that require varying levels of paticipation in exchange for feedback:: http://www.writing-world.com/links/critique.shtml.
Try checking out
Not sure if it is good, sorry havn't used it (I'm waiting for the confirmation email now)
I've been a member of Online Writing Workshop for Science Fiction, Fantasy, and Horror for a couple of years. I left because I didn't have enough time but the service was very good.