This is my first time writing a novel. In my novel, there is a part of the married life of my protagonist who is a woman. I don't have any experience of married life so I have taken inspiration from a movie. There is pages and pages of dialogue between the two for an e.g. this one...
What time is it?” I asked.
“Half past Ten”
“I am glad we went to see the movie”
“Yeah, after a long time, something realistically sensible”
“Aakash, do you believe two people can spend a lifetime together?”
“It’s a ridiculous convention passed down from god knows where.”
“A five-year contract would be ideal. Or an agreement subject to renewal.”
“Would that be applied to us too?
“We are the exception that proves the rule.”
“So you think we will stay together?”
“That sounds like a strange question”
“Doesn’t it bother you to never get to sleep with anyone else?”
“No. Does it bother you?”
“I’ll be damned”
“On a purely speculative basis”
“I wonder whether something's wrong with me”
“I don’t have fantasies like that. I am content”
“Well so am I”
“Oh Now I get”
“I know why Zhenya and Boris in the movie go through hell”
“They do not speak the same language, I mean in terms of expressing themselves like expressing their thoughts and feelings, I think he did not ever understand what she meant when she said what she said, that really is a couple of story moving for separation. They should translate everything into a common language.”
“Ahhh I think its simpler than that”
“You and I we understand each other, we speak the same language, that’s what makes us click”
How should I convert it into a paragraph? Is there any trick?