I am not quite sure whether this question would be a valid one for this site but I am having some doubts and I would love to get some help here.
My case is, I have an assignment where I have to write an introduction to the lead character, the protagonist of a story. This introduction would then be used further to create a story revolving around this person.
Now I have written an introduction, but in that, I am doubtful about the number of times I have used the character's name. Below is an excerpt of what I've written.
Kunal is a 30 year old MBA graduate who lives in the IT hub of India, Bengaluru. A muscular built, fair looking, and above average height man who has a strong vision in his eyes. Kunal hails from a small city, born and brought up in a joint family. Since his childhood, he has been taught the value of family and relations. Kunal shares a special bond with his mother. She has been the life support of Kunal. Ever since his childhood, she has been the support pillar of Kunal. Living in a joint family, it wasn’t always easy to have a quiet, peaceful life; but his mother never let that effect his childhood. Doing his engineering, Kunal knew that this wasn’t the right field for him. Working in the college events, he came to understand his liking for marketing and went for MBA. Pursuing MBA, Kunal found his love for travelling. In his studies of master, did he realise that this was the thing that he would love to do, his field of interest. In his second year, he started a blog sharing his passion for travelling and his travel stories. Doing post-graduation from a city like Shillong, he had tonnes of travel stories to share with the world. Quickly his blog started getting attention and soon he gained fame. Today Kunal lives a rigid life. Wakes up early at 5 in the morning, goes to the gym regularly, follows a healthy diet and puts all his effort in pursuing his dream. Kunal has a vision in his eyes, has a dream to achieve. A dream to travel the entire world and share his experiences to everyone. Kunal believes that travelling should be a luxury that should be for all. With that vision in mind, Kunal is determined to work on it day and night.
PS: I am new to writing so please don't judge my skill straight away. :D
Also, I would love to get some suggestions on what I've written. Thanks!