My story "Finding Akita-Sama" and i`m stuck can someone help me get further into the story? What do I put next? How do I show and not tell? I really need help with this fanfic! Thanks!

  • Welcome to Writers. This isn't precisely a duplicate, but this is the closest match I could find for part of your question, so maybe the answers will help you. Beyond that, asking "how do I show not tell" without any details of your specific situation is too broad. We also don't do critiques or tell you what to write, only how. Please check out our short tour. Jun 25 '17 at 4:06

To show and not tell, use actions and dialogue between your characters. Make scenes. Basically, don't summarize the story/parts of the story as the narrator.

  • Read "Characters and Viewpoint" by Orson Scott Card
    – writersam
    Jun 25 '17 at 2:35

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