I've finally decided to give a protagonist a happy ending, but what is there to avoid? What makes a happy end too cheesy? For example, if the story is about a anti-hero, who destroys his enemies, what can I avoid when writing the happy ending? What makes it too cliché?

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    – DarkYagami
    Jun 11, 2016 at 20:43
  • Just make sure you don't do the silly 'friendship and happiness' thing, where friendship powers magically make the big baddy get defeated. That's what a so called 'cheesy' happy ending would be like, in my opinion. Jun 12, 2016 at 6:10

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I would turn the question around: What makes a happy ending work?

I think it's this:

  1. The character has earned the happy ending. The happy ending comes about as a direct result of the main character's actions. At the very least, the happy ending comes about as a result of the main character realizing something (as in The Wizard of Oz, where Dorothy realizes that happiness is home and family).

  2. The main character had to struggle for it. The happy ending did not come easily. To bring about the happy ending, the main character must do something difficult, or come to some difficult realization, or sacrifice something important.

So avoid having something or someone other than main character being agent of the happy ending. Avoid getting to the happy ending without a struggle.

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    I'll add: Close all loose ends (unless you want to leave a hook for a sequel, or alternatively make the reader ask themselves a question. Nevertheless, always signal all the open threads you leave). A side thread doesn't have to resolve happily. A little bitter adds a lot of flavor to the sweet.
    – SF.
    Jun 13, 2016 at 9:55
  • Another biggie is to make sure the happy ending doesn't occur "magically" - in the writing sense. Things don't all just resolve by themselves and leave the reader thinking that that would never have happened. It has to make sense in the domain of the story. If the antagonist just drops dead with no prior illness, etc., the reader may feel cheated. There have been a number of TV series which knew they were getting cancelled and movies which ran out of funding and just wrapped things up conveniently - which ruined the whole thing.
    – Joe
    Jun 15, 2016 at 8:38

A non-cheesy happy ending is generally a mixed bag; the hero may not get everything they wanted, but they did get what was most important to them.

For example, they didn't get the treasure, but they found true love, and nobody else got the treasure.

Or they succeeded in sending the CEO to prison, but they lost their job, or also got convicted and had to serve a year's probation. Or in achieving victory they lost someone they love.

Give them what they want most, but make it come at a cost.A lot of movies end with sequel potential in just this way; the hero (or anti-hero) prevailed, but at a cost, perhaps a standoff, and addressing this cost is the topic of the next movie.

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