I want to convey the pause between the "then" and the rest of the sentence. But I'm not sure a comma is the correct punctuation to use.
Then, when the smoke had cleared Jane
Or is an ellipsis better? I tend to reserve it for when someone trails off or is interupted in the middle of speech.
Then... when the smoke had cleared Jane
Are either of these correct or is there a better way to express this pause?