Timeline for Does the following piece have too much dry narration (mundane tasks, moving about)?
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| Jun 23, 2013 at 15:51 | vote | accept | wyc | ||
| Jun 23, 2013 at 15:48 | comment | added | markovchain | In reference to your edit, I think that your focus has now disappeared. In terms of coherence, your paragraphs almost have nothing to do with each other now. | |
| Jun 23, 2013 at 5:09 | history | tweeted | twitter.com/#!/StackWriters/status/348669078635937792 | ||
| Jun 21, 2013 at 17:25 | answer | added | Monica Cellio | timeline score: 7 | |
| Jun 21, 2013 at 14:19 | history | edited | wyc | CC BY-SA 3.0 |
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| Jun 21, 2013 at 14:13 | history | edited | wyc | CC BY-SA 3.0 |
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| Jun 21, 2013 at 10:03 | answer | added | Lauren-Clear-Monica-Ipsum | timeline score: 5 | |
| Jun 21, 2013 at 8:50 | comment | added | SF. | In your case it's not the amount of narration that hurts the story, it's how dry it is. I'll probably write a more detailed answer but I really recommend you read the very beginning to Douglas Adams' "Hitchiker's Guide To The Galaxy". It does something very similar but manages to make the narration very juicy. | |
| Jun 21, 2013 at 8:45 | history | edited | wyc | CC BY-SA 3.0 |
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| Jun 21, 2013 at 8:38 | history | asked | wyc | CC BY-SA 3.0 |