Timeline for Critique a short essay
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| Apr 15, 2013 at 17:15 | comment | added | Mussri | @LaurenI Eons hence, useless words yet unscathed, every kille- ehem, edit shall face deat- ehem, being edited. An eye for an eye, an edit for an edit. | |
| Apr 14, 2013 at 18:55 | comment | added | Lauren-Clear-Monica-Ipsum | @Mussri If you edit me, do I not bleed? | |
| Apr 14, 2013 at 17:01 | comment | added | Mussri | @LaurenIpsum You shall suffer for the poor word's sin! | |
| Apr 13, 2013 at 0:14 | comment | added | Lauren-Clear-Monica-Ipsum | @JustSomeDude Yes, I think a pound of flesh can be removed pretty easily from this essay. | |
| Apr 12, 2013 at 23:36 | comment | added | JustSomeDude | @LaurenIpsum I actually didn't have the word fleshy in the previous revision, do you think I should remove it? | |
| Apr 12, 2013 at 21:58 | comment | added | JMcAfreak | I think what is meant by a change in perspective is the notable, but somewhat lacking (you'll see when my answer is posted), change from hatred of his environment to pleasure and minor acceptance. | |
| Apr 12, 2013 at 21:57 | comment | added | Lauren-Clear-Monica-Ipsum | @JustSomeDude Three adjectives can sound better, but they don't always work in every instance. Often it's just overkill. Consider the context. Just because you have a three-adjective hammer, that doesn't make every noun a nail. | |
| Apr 12, 2013 at 21:32 | review | First posts | |||
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| Apr 12, 2013 at 21:22 | comment | added | JustSomeDude | It can be less than 2500 characters but not more. | |
| Apr 12, 2013 at 21:18 | comment | added | JustSomeDude | I've always read that 3 adjectives sound better (rule of three) | |
| Apr 12, 2013 at 21:12 | history | answered | joseph | CC BY-SA 3.0 |