Timeline for How do I write a room full of panic?
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| S Apr 8, 2023 at 14:58 | vote | accept | SB Miah | ||
| S Apr 8, 2023 at 14:58 | vote | accept | SB Miah | ||
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| S Apr 8, 2023 at 14:58 | vote | accept | SB Miah | ||
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| Apr 8, 2023 at 14:58 | vote | accept | SB Miah | ||
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| Apr 7, 2023 at 23:37 | answer | added | EDL | timeline score: 1 | |
| Apr 7, 2023 at 22:03 | answer | added | kmunky | timeline score: 0 | |
| Apr 7, 2023 at 20:21 | answer | added | Alexandrang | timeline score: 1 | |
| Apr 7, 2023 at 19:43 | comment | added | SB Miah | @BobaFit Thank you so much! This helped me a lot :) | |
| Apr 7, 2023 at 19:43 | comment | added | SB Miah | @JRE thank you! Also to clarify I meant that the train is accelerating at fast speeds before it goes off tracks. In this moment would the passengers feel panicked or just pure terror? | |
| Apr 7, 2023 at 19:40 | comment | added | SB Miah | @kmunky to clarify, my question is how can I convey a sense of fear and panic through my writing regarding the train situation? | |
| Apr 6, 2023 at 17:50 | comment | added | kmunky | Can you clarify the question? Are you asking what are some of the considerations/details of a train going off the rails and how people respond to it, or are you asking about writing techniques to convey the feeling of panic to the reader? | |
| Apr 6, 2023 at 13:33 | comment | added | JRE | If the train is off the tracks, then the passengers will be tossed and bounced around the inside of the cars. They'll not be worried about being in a pedestrian area. They'll be worried about their own broken arms, legs, and necks. The won't be panicing, they'll be be screaming in pain and fear. Trains must be on the tracks to run. A train off its tracks is a wreck - it isn't going anywhere, and certainly not faster than normal. | |
| Apr 6, 2023 at 13:33 | comment | added | Boba Fit | Unless the train is unusual, from the first moment it's off the tracks, until the crash is over, all the people on the train will be doing is bouncing. Or related but more restrictive actions such as squishing etc. After the crash you will have various forms of shock rather than panic. | |
| Apr 6, 2023 at 13:01 | answer | added | hszmv | timeline score: 2 | |
| S Apr 6, 2023 at 12:01 | review | First questions | |||
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| S Apr 6, 2023 at 12:01 | history | asked | SB Miah | CC BY-SA 4.0 |