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MostIn writing, most facial expressions are very open to broad interpretation and lead to less immersive description — by that I mean they rely on more intellectual or rationalizing interpretationinterpretations than resonating with emotionevoking specific emotions.

While itsit's good to use character facial expressions to make the story tellingstorytelling more immersive — reminding us there aare people filling the space that the pages inhabit — a sharing character’s reaction is a much more powerful technique since it can evoke the readersreader's memory of when they either encountered a person expressinglike that emotion or expressed that emotion themselves.

So rather than say 'she had a tight lipped smile-lipped smile' or broad smile try things like'she only smiled with her eyes' use 'her smile made my blood run coldcold' — Okay, its very muchit's a trope, but I’m not going to give away my best stuff for free — or her'her smile reminded me that winterwinters didn’t last, that summers followed, that I shouldn’t give up hope, that I should endure.'

Sharing character reactions to events is a very powerful technique to communicate subtle and moving emotional elements and moments in a story.

Most facial expressions are very open to broad interpretation and lead to less immersive description — by that I mean they rely on more intellectual or rationalizing interpretation than resonating with emotion.

While its good to use character facial expressions to make the story telling more immersive — reminding us there a people filling the space the pages inhabit — a character’s reaction is much more powerful technique since it can evoke the readers memory of when they either encountered a person expressing that emotion or expressed that emotion themselves.

So rather say a tight lipped smile or broad smile try things like her smile made my blood run cold — Okay, its very much a trope but I’m not going to give away my best stuff for free — or her smile reminded me that winter didn’t last, that summers followed, that I shouldn’t give up hope, that I should endure.

Sharing character reactions to events is a very powerful technique to communicate subtle and moving emotional elements in a story.

In writing, most facial expressions are open to broad interpretation and lead to less immersive description — by that I mean they rely on more intellectual or rationalizing interpretations than evoking specific emotions.

While it's good to use character facial expressions to make the storytelling more immersive — reminding us there are people filling the space that the pages inhabit — a sharing character’s reaction is a much more powerful technique since it can evoke the reader's memory of when they either encountered a person like that or expressed that emotion themselves.

So rather than say 'she had a tight-lipped smile' or 'she only smiled with her eyes' use 'her smile made my blood run cold' — Okay, it's a trope, but I’m not going to give away my best stuff for free — or 'her smile reminded me that winters didn’t last, that summers followed, that I shouldn’t give up hope.'

Sharing character reactions to events is a very powerful technique to communicate subtle and moving emotional elements and moments in a story.

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Most facial expressions are very open to broad interpretation and lead to less immersive description — by that I mean they rely on more intellectual or rationalizing interpretation than resonating with emotion.

While its good to use character facial expressions to make the story telling more immersive — reminding us there a people filling the space the pages inhabit — a character’s reaction is much more powerful technique since it can evoke the readers memory of when they either encountered a person expressing that emotion or expressed that emotion themselves.

So rather say a tight lipped smile or broad smile try things like her smile made my blood run cold — Okay, its very much a trope but I’m not going to give away my best stuff for free — or her smile reminded me that winter didn’t last, that summers followed, that I shouldn’t give up hope, that I should endure.

Sharing character reactions to events is a very powerful technique to communicate subtle and moving emotional elements in a story.