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Dec 18, 2022 at 19:08 vote accept CommunityBot moved from User.Id=36239 by developer User.Id=55239
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Dec 18, 2022 at 16:44 comment added SFWriter I'd be tempted to move the violence into a clearly marked fleeting fantasy on the part of the point of view character, particularly if and assuming that this reaction is part of her personality.
Dec 18, 2022 at 14:11 comment added JRE Why did you put the scene in there? What is the point of the physical conflict? Are the characters normally best friends, and it is the seriousness of the situation that caused the explosion? Why did that explosion happen, and what did you want to show the reader with it?
Dec 18, 2022 at 13:07 history edited JRE CC BY-SA 4.0
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