Timeline for Internal thoughts or just narration?
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| May 26, 2021 at 0:55 | history | edited | linksassin♦ |
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| Mar 3, 2021 at 17:24 | vote | accept | Erin Tesden | ||
| Mar 2, 2021 at 23:15 | history | edited | user11111111111 | CC BY-SA 4.0 |
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| Mar 2, 2021 at 20:25 | history | edited | EDL | CC BY-SA 4.0 |
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| Mar 2, 2021 at 19:59 | history | edited | EDL | CC BY-SA 4.0 |
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| Mar 2, 2021 at 17:16 | comment | added | DWKraus | I have to admit I like the internal thoughts better, but some of that is style. In paragraph 2, though, I think you have speech by one person, and internal dialog by another. If that's the case, you should really separate them into two paragraphs because internal dialog is a form of speech. Hard to tell because it's just a snippet. | |
| Mar 2, 2021 at 15:51 | comment | added | DM_with_secrets | It's possible to have the tone of the second set with the style of the first set. For example: His uncle looked so happy talking about his old ally. Why didn’t he speak about him more often? | |
| Mar 2, 2021 at 14:49 | history | edited | Erin Tesden | CC BY-SA 4.0 |
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| Mar 2, 2021 at 11:07 | answer | added | SF. | timeline score: 1 | |
| Mar 2, 2021 at 8:40 | history | asked | Erin Tesden | CC BY-SA 4.0 |