Timeline for When to use the character's name and when to use she/he?
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May 9, 2022 at 17:32 | history | edited | Laurel♦ |
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Jun 11, 2020 at 14:49 | comment | added | ArtickokeAndAnchovyPizzaMonica | +1 for the useful question and beautiful writing. Have you thought about asking someone else to read the text - if they can tell whose speaking then what you have is very good. | |
Feb 9, 2018 at 7:55 | comment | added | can-ned_food | Seems to me that the use of pronouns in this example is more or less acceptable. Minimal confusion and not harsh in the prose. | |
Apr 15, 2012 at 5:06 | history | tweeted | twitter.com/#!/StackWriters/status/191392098950463488 | ||
Apr 13, 2012 at 20:51 | vote | accept | wyc | ||
Apr 13, 2012 at 17:53 | comment | added | temporary_user_name | Not to derail the question but-- "A friend, a wealthy Christian, of his offered him a job;" -- That's really wrong. Needs rewording. | |
Apr 13, 2012 at 15:42 | answer | added | Lauren-Clear-Monica-Ipsum | timeline score: 12 | |
Apr 13, 2012 at 15:30 | comment | added | Goodbye Stack Exchange | Related: I'm getting tired of “he said” “she said” in dialogue; how do I get around it? | |
Apr 13, 2012 at 12:46 | history | edited | wyc | CC BY-SA 3.0 |
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Apr 13, 2012 at 12:38 | history | asked | wyc | CC BY-SA 3.0 |