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May 9, 2022 at 17:32 history edited Laurel
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Jun 11, 2020 at 14:49 comment added ArtickokeAndAnchovyPizzaMonica +1 for the useful question and beautiful writing. Have you thought about asking someone else to read the text - if they can tell whose speaking then what you have is very good.
Feb 9, 2018 at 7:55 comment added can-ned_food Seems to me that the use of pronouns in this example is more or less acceptable. Minimal confusion and not harsh in the prose.
Apr 15, 2012 at 5:06 history tweeted twitter.com/#!/StackWriters/status/191392098950463488
Apr 13, 2012 at 20:51 vote accept wyc
Apr 13, 2012 at 17:53 comment added temporary_user_name Not to derail the question but-- "A friend, a wealthy Christian, of his offered him a job;" -- That's really wrong. Needs rewording.
Apr 13, 2012 at 15:42 answer added Lauren-Clear-Monica-Ipsum timeline score: 12
Apr 13, 2012 at 15:30 comment added Goodbye Stack Exchange Related: I'm getting tired of “he said” “she said” in dialogue; how do I get around it?
Apr 13, 2012 at 12:46 history edited wyc CC BY-SA 3.0
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Apr 13, 2012 at 12:38 history asked wyc CC BY-SA 3.0