Timeline for On Characters' Motivations
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| Dec 5, 2018 at 19:41 | comment | added | Daniel | Thanks! That's exactly what I was thinking. If the murder victim was someone close to the MC he would be on some sort of revenge and that's not what I want to entail. Instead the story is more about morality. The MC is a paragon while his dad thinks the only way to a safer city is to control all of the underworld with an iron fist . I'm just afraid the reader is not going to be convinced that the MC is bent on having his own father go to jail because he saw some random person's death. Yet, I think is good enough reason considering his belief system | |
| Dec 5, 2018 at 18:47 | history | answered | Cyn | CC BY-SA 4.0 |