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Aug 21, 2018 at 13:17 comment added Vítor Carvalho Thank you. Yes, your references were quite helpful, they will come in handy if I have a hard time executing some of my ideas, I can always find inspiration in them.
Aug 21, 2018 at 13:09 comment added Liquid I was just giving my gut feeling about your idea, ofc you can go with whatever you please; but in the end, yes, the idea you're proposing seems already more satisfying. Hope the references were useful.
Aug 21, 2018 at 13:03 comment added Vítor Carvalho What if I changed it to something like this. Our protagonist, after fighting valiantly against our antagonist, understands that they are equally matched and both of them won't stop fighting until the other perishes, they have an incredible amount of determination for their ideals, one would not stand see the other survive. With this, our protagonist jumps in front of the antagonist's blade, getting stabbed trough the chest, and so our protagonist is close enough to give the final blow to the antagonist, they both lie dead on the ground as they both go to their eternal sleep.
Aug 21, 2018 at 12:54 comment added Vítor Carvalho Our antagonist perceives the humans as horrible and chaotic beings, he believes that the rules created by wizard kind to hide wizards from humans are only beneficial to the humans, he believes that if humanity was eradicated from the planet it would be a perfect utopia, he perceives wizards as some sort of deity that should be praised by humans. He's end goal is a better life for his people and getting back the world that was taken from them.
Aug 21, 2018 at 12:54 comment added Vítor Carvalho I didn't go into much details because I didn't want to "spoil" my story before it even came out. I can tell you with certainty that the ethics aren't as black and white as you might think. The fantasy world that I created has wizards and witches as the main focus, the wizard world as been forced into hiding by humanity's desire for power, a long time ago humanity hunted wizards and killed them, with the wizard dead the humans could steel their powers. In the present day, no human knows about wizard kind and the wizards just decided that it would be better to forget the dark past that happened.
Aug 21, 2018 at 12:16 history edited Liquid CC BY-SA 4.0
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Aug 21, 2018 at 11:32 history answered Liquid CC BY-SA 4.0