Timeline for Describing something that doesn't exist
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| Apr 24, 2018 at 23:48 | comment | added | corsiKa | There are exactly two good things about first drafts: 1) they exist, and 2) they can be rewritten. That's usually about it. | |
| Apr 24, 2018 at 21:39 | comment | added | SFWriter | @Samuel Yes, :) the thought occurred, but first drafts are sloppy like that. Smushing allows action changing the egg, elongated is telling. Maybe second draft would be a twinkie, but a twinkie left on the bus seat and a small child accidentally sat upon ... | |
| Apr 24, 2018 at 21:26 | vote | accept | Aspen the Artist and Author | ||
| Apr 24, 2018 at 21:14 | comment | added | Samuel | "if that egg had been smushed on the top so that it spread sleekly from each end" I think the term you're looking for is 'elongated'. Smushed eggs crack, they don't elongate. Or, maybe just go with Twinkie. | |
| Apr 24, 2018 at 20:04 | history | answered | SFWriter | CC BY-SA 3.0 |