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I want How to describe how my leada character as one way - but when we first meet him he is another way. Let me explain.with changing features?

I’m writing the pilot for a Crime/Mystery/Thriller.

When we first meet the lead detective character - he is depressed about not being able to work. Not at his best, but all of that is about to change for him - sort of.

I want to describe that (normally) he’s a calm/confident/wise etc... So that the person reading my script will know how the detective is supposed to act when the time comes for him to shine.

How do I do this? Or doshould I not describe how he normally is until he is generallynormal?

Thanks!

I want to describe how my lead character as one way - but when we first meet him he is another way. Let me explain.

I’m writing the pilot for a Crime/Mystery/Thriller.

When we first meet the lead detective character - he is depressed about not being able to work. Not at his best, but all of that is about to change for him - sort of.

I want to describe that (normally) he’s a calm/confident/wise etc...

How do I do this? Or do I not describe how he is generally?

Thanks!

How to describe a character with changing features?

I’m writing the pilot for a Crime/Mystery/Thriller.

When we first meet the lead detective character - he is depressed about not being able to work. Not at his best, but that is about to change for him - sort of.

I want to describe that (normally) he’s a calm/confident/wise etc... So that the person reading my script will know how the detective is supposed to act when the time comes for him to shine.

Or should I not describe how he normally is until he is normal?

Thanks!

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Marcus Meier
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I want to describe how my lead character as one way - but when we first meet him he is another way. Let me explain.

I’m writing the pilot for a Crime/Mystery/Thriller.

When we first meet the lead detective character - he is depressed about not being able to work. Not at his best, but all of that is about to change for him - sort of.

I want to describe that (normally) he’s a calm/confident/wise etc...

How do I do this? Or do I not describe how he is generally?

Thanks!