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Sep 3, 2017 at 16:54 comment added circepix Yeah, you're right, I realize it's the journey that counts, I just was worried about rehashing the same tired thing over and over, but I suppose a lot of the strength of a story comes from all the pieces put together and not just the individual bits. Still, I was getting really stuck on this on issue. I'm glad to have gotten such useful feedback
Sep 3, 2017 at 16:48 comment added user @circepix For a character to be one thing at the beginning of a story, and the reader getting to follow them growing toward something else at the end of a story, is a common theme. (I hesitate to call it plot.) And for YA, it might be one of the better choices.
Sep 3, 2017 at 16:14 comment added circepix Yes, thank you! I was worried that the arc of "mousy girl to brave hero" was too shallow or easy, but having her, as you said, take these steps of her own volition is exactly what she needs, Thanks for the suggestions! They were very helpful :)
Sep 3, 2017 at 16:08 vote accept circepix
Sep 3, 2017 at 16:00 history answered Amadeus CC BY-SA 3.0