Timeline for Time flips / thinking about past too often
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| Aug 2, 2017 at 16:57 | comment | added | sudowoodo | Thanks @ggiaquin! Yeah, I knew he had been told already, but wasn’t sure if it had been mentioned in the context of asking critique in comments on answers, rather than in the question itself. I was a little worried that this question was a front for seeking critique without getting the question itself deleted, so wanted to encourage Aspen again to use the answers he’s given to solve the problem himself. | |
| Aug 2, 2017 at 15:45 | comment | added | ggiaquin16 | @sudowoodo agreed! Unfortunately Aspen is also like 16 years old not that being younger has any negative connotation! simply implying the maturity level may not always be there. He has also been told several times about critiquing. | |
| Aug 2, 2017 at 13:37 | comment | added | sudowoodo | @Aspen Rand, Unfortunately, reading your chapter and telling you what's wrong with it is critique, which we don't do on this site. I think Jay's advice was pretty sound though: make it as clear as possible that these "flashback" scenes are happening in the past and are not part of the present ongoing narrative. If you don't understand, please ask for clarification rather than just saying "makes no sense but okay." | |
| Aug 2, 2017 at 1:23 | comment | added | Aspen the Artist and Author | I have put up a link to the chapter in which this happens, if you would like to check it out and try and figure out the problem with it's construction, that would be great. Thanks. | |
| Aug 1, 2017 at 17:35 | comment | added | Jay | If you mean that you didn't understand some specific part of what I was trying to say, please ask more specifically. If you mean that my answer was totally incoherent and you have no idea what I was trying to say at all, then okay, sorry. If you mean that you understand but don't agree, okay fine, variety is the spice of life. :-) | |
| Aug 1, 2017 at 9:00 | comment | added | Aspen the Artist and Author | That made like, zero sense, @Jay. But okay | |
| Jul 31, 2017 at 16:25 | history | answered | Jay | CC BY-SA 3.0 |