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| Jan 18, 2017 at 20:36 | comment | added | manyaceist | Changing the first act is exactly what I need to do – good point about making sure the emotional stakes are clear and are the drivers of the story. And thank you for the point about obstacles – somehow, in the tangle of elements in the story, I have completely failed to put up sufficient obstacles. These are useful things to have in my head while I do another re-read and prepare for another re-write. | |
| Jan 18, 2017 at 0:39 | history | edited | Loser Like You | CC BY-SA 3.0 |
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| Jan 18, 2017 at 0:30 | history | answered | Loser Like You | CC BY-SA 3.0 |