Timeline for How to give written advice in a way that is encouraging, not overbearing
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| Jan 5, 2016 at 20:07 | history | edited | rolfedh | CC BY-SA 3.0 |
Updated the content to better address the original question.
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| Jan 5, 2016 at 15:29 | comment | added | rolfedh | I just realized that my recommendations are based on my internalization of a book I read a very long time ago: Parent Effectiveness Training by T. Gordon. en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Parent_Effectiveness_Training | |
| Jan 5, 2016 at 15:23 | comment | added | rolfedh | If you've ever had a sympathetic relative who you trusted to go to with problems, imagine them as the lecturer. | |
| Jan 5, 2016 at 15:21 | comment | added | rolfedh | Sorry. But I'd rather let you implement those suggestions using your own voice. I'm here to help you write, not to write for you. I hope you understand. Post your ideas here and I'll be glad to give additional feedback. | |
| Jan 5, 2016 at 15:17 | comment | added | Jony Agarwal | Thank you so much for the answer! However, it would be really great if you could add sample sentences - at-least 1 in each of these points! That would be nice. Even better if you could pick sentences from the paragraph itself which would fit into one of those points. I understand that this is a monolog and not a conversation but which other points exactly did I miss in my paragraph? | |
| Jan 5, 2016 at 15:07 | history | edited | rolfedh | CC BY-SA 3.0 |
Expanded content. Fixed a typo.
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| Jan 5, 2016 at 15:01 | history | answered | rolfedh | CC BY-SA 3.0 |