Timeline for How to write a prompt email?
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Apr 4, 2011 at 9:45 | comment | added | Panda | The wording here is a little off. "I'm just sending in a query" is not correct, "This is a query" is more accurate. The second sentance should be "I have yet to recieve a response", although that's slightly passive-agressive, so "I don't believe I have recieved a response yet" is better. But also crucially you need to ask them what you want them to do, so it should end with "Can you please update me on the status of my submission?" or similar. | |
Feb 3, 2011 at 20:20 | comment | added | atroon | Note on usage: if you 'do not believe' you 'have yet to receive' that means you have indeed received a response. Just sayin'. | |
Feb 3, 2011 at 18:03 | history | answered | Fox Cutter | CC BY-SA 2.5 |